I must say your melody was not that crazy as you wanted, but it doesn't have to be.
This is a personal opinion but I think your work is divided in too clear parts, perhaps you could make a softer transition between them.
But it's very good, it was surely worth your effort!
(btw, your title is not attractive at all, I just clicked to listen to this because it is the only left on the newest ones, you could work on that too)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.