Nice make moar!
DukeLuke said: Too lazy to write lyrics :P
Well I don't...:
Come take your key and your son to leave,
forget it; it's over now,
You tried everything and gave all you had
but you figured to know what way
The things that'd had, are nothing but smoking now
and the gum stops chasing them.
My only advise is to leave this please,
And yes, we are...
I think this is pretty close since it's hard to know what you say with a vocoder-effect. By reading the lyrics and the title saying "Move On" it could be based on a broken marriage, a divorce. Am I right? If so I hope it isn't really personal stated that it happened to you?
I love the song, it isn't emo at all, you should make 1:23 - 1:49 longer. Called Techno is close enough. (I like diversity, not a song with a replaying rhythm.)
Hey man, I'm sorry for the wait. Okay you've got the lyrics almost right, but what I actually sang was this:
Come take your keys, it's time to leave,
forget it, it's over now,
You've tried everything and you gave all you had
but you figured - to no avail
The things that you had are nothing but smoke now
they're gone, stop chasing them
My only advise is to leave this place,
Forget, and move on.
And luckily the subject isn't a divorce or any other personal drama, I was just feeling a bit melancholic at the time ;)
Thanks a lot for your comment, I appreciate it :)
You should use the vocoder more often
Too lazy to write lyrics :P
Awesome... I loved how you used the vocoder!
i liked it it is really good. great job keep up the good work.
by the way you should really check out some of my techno songs
You're right, the vocoder does hide a lot of things. But it sound fantastic when done right...
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.