There's good stuff in here
Don't use two notes on that Z3TA+ preset unless it's an octave. You just have to get more stuff going at once that sounds good.
Try using that melody later though cause it sounds pretty good.
alright i redid a lot of stuff, moved around the melody, made a new melody (partially), and made it longer, im gonna fool around with it a little while longer then put it up.
Its actually pritty good. You should go into some crazy fast solo with that lead though. check out my shiz http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/210120. sorry i shouldnt advertise. Its just my review is too short lololz. hmm i think there is a problem. It still says its too short. O well better keep using up characters. Yeah i think you should just give up and make a new song. :D
you're too kind, haha, i got bored so i started fixing it up and added a new melody to it, ill get it up once im done.