Needs better mixing
Beat has potential, flow is on-point but needs better EQ and mixing. You need a little bit of panning in the instrumentation and the vocals, there's no width to your mix. The mastering is a bit harsh as well, like you peaked out the EQ on everything above 2kHz and below 200 Hz, the treble and bass are both overpowering while the mids are dead.
Otherwise, rep Screwston to the fullest, nom tom bot? I'm out of ABI-lean up in Central West, good to hear another Texas voice puttin' it down on NG, but don't expect much from this site. Alot of hate, very little talent, and most of the site is about Grime more than the Southern Grind.
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cuz i cant hear a thing unda that wak beet. u wood get all 10 if i cood heer the leerics.
I am more in preference to this underground kind of rap. The tune was great, a really urban feel to it. keep up the good work.
Kind regards -
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