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song i wrote on guitar. i welcome any and all review, even negative.

you can get lost in the streets of chicago, there's so many bridges to burn there
and they won't know your history or your problems, you can disappear into the cold air
and when they ask you were you're from, you can say a dark part of detroit
and leave out all the dark bits and the glass, that make your poor heart start to heart

and they won't know, and they won't know you're lying
cause all they'll see is that sad little girl we've all grown to love

you can pretend that i was just a gust, just a breeze, that brought you to where you need to be
and you can act like your heart doesn't bleed. it don't kill, stabbed with the memories
and you can smile when someone says the love you, like you've never had those words in your ear
and you can lie to yourself, but you can't lie to me, i was there

and they won't know, and they won't know, you're lying
cause all they'll see is that sad little girl we've all grown to love.


Don't forget to brethe!

voice could use some work...but the music was excellent...
a soundtrack (no words) of this wouldn't hurt

TheLameSauce responds:

lol. yea the singing is new to me. trying to perfect it.

I enjoyed.

It was good, I felt the guitar tune was a bit all over the place - I think, for this kind of song, a more fixed chord progression would be better. Singing was good, just try and improve your voice projection. A good song though, keep up the good work.

Kind regards -

TheLameSauce responds:

hey, thanks man. singing is scary and hard to fully commit to i have found. reviews are always appreciated.

Like The Original Melody :D

I Loved that guitar melody and the quality of the guitar but next time add some reverb and some bass.i can't really hear you singing but nevertheless its great :D
5/5 10/10

TheLameSauce responds:

thanks a lot. i just sat near my wal mart mic and recorded it in a sitting. i'm sure with any production thrown in it would sound a lot better. but thanks for the positive response!

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Credits & Info

2.59 / 5.00

Feb 4, 2009
11:14 AM EST
General Rock
File Info
2.5 MB
2 min 41 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.