it is alright
it is alright for a short demo but it seemed a bit choppy, hope you don't get offended when i say this but compared to some of your other stuff this isn't your best song. don't get mad at me saying that.
p.s. please check out my song death of the lightning
Ok,I agree it is a little choppy witch I tryed to prevent but I came with this.I'm glad you gave me the review and I will use your and all other NG members sudgestions.