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Be Real (Fly With The Angels)

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Jersey E at it once again at our new studio. Featuring ESman and our producer on the hook. Peace!

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Are you pro?

Dude this is freakin' awesome! ^_^

jerseyendless responds:

hah glad you think so but we're far from pro.

On our way though :]

RE stevie B

Stevie B could use a little heaviness on his vowels, and ur chorus goes flat somewhere in the middle. Still, the lyrics are solid, and it's easy to tell how much work went into this one. No major mistakes, just a couple things to fine-tune. This is some hella-good work, man.

jerseyendless responds:

thanks for the review man.

Good shit man.

I like what you guys got here a lot. Hope you don't mind some constructive critique.

The flow:

Your flows are pretty tight and smooth most of the time. The only problem I had was at times the flow just got waay too slow (most the first guy, don't know his name). I don't mind slow flows, but there is such thing as too slow when you find yourself stretching words out too long. Nothing one or two more words in each line couldn't solve. But again, it was on point, just could have used some spicing up.

The rhymes were pretty good, sometimes got a little bland, but overall tight as hell.

That's all I really got for now. Again, good shit, this is hiphop. 5/5

Peace!

jerseyendless responds:

ah thanks alot man
and yea the first guy stevie B is workin on that.
but thanks for the review man.
review our other newest track rockstar
and let esman know what you think of him.

stay up cuzzin.

Jae nyce a.k.a Ej

Lets get realistic

If you dont have haters your doing something wrong. And you guys are doin the right thing right here. This was very moving keep it up J.E.

jerseyendless responds:

people were zero-bombing Jersey Girl cuz its all the way in the high 3's instead at like 4.30 and higher, we got haters haha.

thanks for the review lej, stay up!

nice work!

This is perfect. More than one syllable rhymes with good flow sounds awesome. Great work on this track. Keep them coming!

jerseyendless responds:

thanks YoinK appreciate the review homie.
we keep da tracks comin u keep da review coming aight?

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Feb 3, 2009
3:36 PM EST
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6.6 MB
4 min 47 sec

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