Ok, here we go!
Lovely beginning, is that live guitar or keyboard?
You do stay on each pattern a little bit too long, but on the other hand you do have a clearly identifiable chorus.
The song could benefit from more instruments, or more dynamic drums.
slow but moving
After listening to this for a mnitue I found myself nodding my head to the beat, I still am now, heheh. It's kinda slow, but strangely melodic. It gives me a nostalgiac feeling of early childhood.
Very well done.