I'm giving this a nine, because the work in this song is obvious. I had one major problem with it though. There were parts of the song that were in a major key when they shouldn't have been. It may be the technical notes, but with these happier sounding instruments, it sounded a little too happy. I love songs in a minor, so that really stood out too me. But it really was great, so good job. Probably getting ebtter better percussion would help a lot.
Keep up the submissions!