PLEAZE COMMENT AND RATE!!!!!! let me know how to improve, and what i did good/bad. or just put any random comment. all reviews are welcome and will be read and taken into consideration. thanks for reading this, and listening to my song. ENJOY!! :D
Hmm
The melody has potential and all, but the only problem is, you need more filling of different sorts of sounds, with the same rhythm as your main theme, and try building up to a climax.
Some of the synths used also make the song kind of sound very offtune, but an octave change will easily fix that.
Not bad for your first few songs though, just try to listen to other songs and try to fill in those empty spaces, the same way other good songs did.
4/5 (but 5 of course :D) 9/10
Thanks for the great advise, I'll be sure to try and do everything you said next time. And thanks for the 5! :D
meh
not bad
just keep at it
thanks, and I will!! :)
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The chords sound really childish to me... Very simple.... try to make it more interesting...
alright. i will try to make the chords less childish, and more interesting. thanks for the comment.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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