The melody has potential and all, but the only problem is, you need more filling of different sorts of sounds, with the same rhythm as your main theme, and try building up to a climax.
Some of the synths used also make the song kind of sound very offtune, but an octave change will easily fix that.
Not bad for your first few songs though, just try to listen to other songs and try to fill in those empty spaces, the same way other good songs did.
4/5 (but 5 of course :D) 9/10
Thanks for the great advise, I'll be sure to try and do everything you said next time. And thanks for the 5! :D
just keep at it
thanks, and I will!! :)
The chords sound really childish to me... Very simple.... try to make it more interesting...
alright. i will try to make the chords less childish, and more interesting. thanks for the comment.