Beginning of a good rave track, methinks.

What you have up here is downright solid; the bass is something I wasn't expecting to hear but it gives the song its own style and sets it apart from others in that regard. The melody is nice, too; the low tones push the work in the right direction.

Simply expanding upon this "stub" and creating a full 2:00+ song out of it would suffice, but if you worked at improving things you think are off, you could have a serious contender here. With enough luck you could have a weekly top five.

Nice...

Your stuff is really good you just need to find a way to turn it into a full song.

Arranging a song is probably the hardest part of writing music but once you start turning sweet melodies like this one into full songs you'll be on easy street.

Good work man and thanks for the review on my song!

5/5

Not bad...

Its pretty cool, u got some good ideas. Just turn some of em into full songs and they would be tight.

i like it.

sounds to me like loneliness! but all i feel is happiness.
please make alonger version it sounds awesome!