Beginning of a good rave track, methinks.
What you have up here is downright solid; the bass is something I wasn't expecting to hear but it gives the song its own style and sets it apart from others in that regard. The melody is nice, too; the low tones push the work in the right direction.
Simply expanding upon this "stub" and creating a full 2:00+ song out of it would suffice, but if you worked at improving things you think are off, you could have a serious contender here. With enough luck you could have a weekly top five.