Amazing...
Love this melody you got going on... Keep up the awesome work kid.... But the sudden transistions you shouldnt do... Well just in my opinion i hate it when people do the stop and go.... Just transistion it. The second melody is pretty sweet too.
Only complaint is your lack of sounds. Some are alright and the others are kinda weird..... With a little more work on this i think you could make it pretty nice.... Keep up the good work kid....
B Tech