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This is my first song. Ever. Which is why its so....well, I'll leave the critique to you. no basis for the beat, just a song I made up awhile ago. And then when I got into my school's tech lab, thus, it was remixed and born as....this.

I came up with everything for this; it took me two weeks, since I fail at garageband. It was created in garageband. (as mentioned aforementionedly-ly-ly) I had no motifs or inspiration other then I came up with this song awhile ago. People have said it sounds like something out of a video game,or Naruto/ Legend of Zelda/ Lord of The Rings/ Bleach/ Inuyasha/ Final Fantasy/ Tekken/ Some sort of combat game -ish music. (Which is weird. Because I don't think it sounds like any of them. XD)Some have even said it sounds like some sort of t.v show Ive never heard of nor remember the title of. >.>

Its kinda long, so... I may shorten it. XD

Well, please be kind, but honest with your review. Im not sure what genre this should be exactly, but...well, here it is. In all its akward glory. >.>

Yes, I know its off beat at times. And yes, I know its kinda loud. >.>....

So anyway....Yes. Thank you. Enjoy.

Call me Mei~ ^_^ ( pronounced MAE-EE)

Oh yes, I dedicate this song to my buds in Australia who have begun the long trek of being a senior in highschool, my dear piano teacher, wherever she may be, and my buds and family at home. XD

And gamers everywhere. LURV FOR GIRL GAMERS.
Okay, Im done. (Sorry, Im excited and acting stupid about my first post. XD)



except for the part around 2:46 i think it had a nice beat excep for the sound of something...maybe it's intentinal im not sure but it sounds like static to me. For your first song i think it rocks! And i think you should work on it and do some other things. Just the fact that this is your first song is awesome because alot of people don't have the patients or creativity to do anything.. let alone have the courage to put it up for everyone to rag on... so PLEASE keep workin I like it alot. put a smile on my face :)

ravenwind137 responds:

Aw, thanks. ^_^ I can't really do it now because I made this at my highschool and that's where all the equipment is... but we'll see. ^_^


You already noted that the tempo was a little wack... so thanks for the warning... and as for loud, that isn't a problem in general, but the equalization of the instruments is crucial, the piano is way over powering compared to the guitar and more importantly the drums, which gives you the tempo for the song, I can barly hear the drums throughout the song.

Enough Critizism though, I do like the sound of the song, and it does flow well, so kudos to you and i hope you will be able to make improvements on this song.

ravenwind137 responds:

Thanks for the review. ^_^ I appreciate the input.

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3.58 / 5.00

Feb 2, 2009
1:59 PM EST
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5.1 MB
5 min 31 sec

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