except for the part around 2:46 i think it had a nice beat excep for the sound of something...maybe it's intentinal im not sure but it sounds like static to me. For your first song i think it rocks! And i think you should work on it and do some other things. Just the fact that this is your first song is awesome because alot of people don't have the patients or creativity to do anything.. let alone have the courage to put it up for everyone to rag on... so PLEASE keep workin I like it alot. put a smile on my face :)
Aw, thanks. ^_^ I can't really do it now because I made this at my highschool and that's where all the equipment is... but we'll see. ^_^
You already noted that the tempo was a little wack... so thanks for the warning... and as for loud, that isn't a problem in general, but the equalization of the instruments is crucial, the piano is way over powering compared to the guitar and more importantly the drums, which gives you the tempo for the song, I can barly hear the drums throughout the song.
Enough Critizism though, I do like the sound of the song, and it does flow well, so kudos to you and i hope you will be able to make improvements on this song.
Thanks for the review. ^_^ I appreciate the input.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.