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I put a lot of what I learned into this song, hopefully it shows.
Constructive criticism is always appreciated it! Actually, I WANT it! So leave me a review and tell me what you liked and what you didn't like please.


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This is in its own right, an O.K. techno song. It just seems like the same thing that is coming out of every other hopeful artist. It has too much of everything imo, most techno song do that, but some of the greatest are mostly one thing, such as mostly low, heart-vibrating bass, or continuous electro sounds. Other than that, it was pretty good.


This song has alot of good things about it. But the thing that i have to say is that...it seems like one big verse. There isn't really a defining part that i look forward to while listening to it. But the melodys and bass are much improved and work well together. Song structure is key imo, and a big "chorusy" part is much needed. Otherwise good work and, as always.. good dos.

Cirrow responds:

Thanks Erik.
Good dos.


Overall I liked it. It's definitely a good techno/electronic song in it's own right, and that's also the only thing I have wrong with it as well. You've got some good sections, but I'd like to see what you could do to make it be a little more unique, and really stand out. Good work though, I'd like to see what else you come up with. Cheers.

Cirrow responds:

I agree, it does need something unique. I was actually just working on hitting some of the trance aspects instead of originality. Thanks for the review.

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3.77 / 5.00

Feb 1, 2009
11:28 PM EST
File Info
4.3 MB
1 min 54 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.