I like this from 0:20. Good idea, but ... maybe you could do it a little longer?
P.S. don't kill me for commenting :-)
nahh ...thx i apreciate the comment
AH! I FINALY GOT TO REVIEW THIS!!! YESSS FINALY!!!!! its a good song i like the instruments u used and the snare :) good work!
thx alot but idon'tthink ill be making anymore songs cuz thaey suck and i have nomore inspiration so yeah this is my final song!
It's got some good sounds in the song. I think the problem is that it's hard to pick out the melody. FL Studio can be hard to use since it isn't very user friendly. I would still think that "This...is...CRACKLE" is your best so far, in my opinion. Good work though. You are getting better at it. I can tell. Just keep practicing. What could make it better is a slower build-up. Plus, to keep adding more to the song is to add a "breaking point" to each verse. Kind of like adding a drum within each verse. Again... just keep practicing. What motivates you more than anything is your own self. :)