The downward-step intro is jarring, but you 'kinda get used to it'. The progression and musical ideas you have in there are nice, and you do the loop transition back to the start really well.
The mixing is atrocious, but the sounds themselves are nice.
For being the "Same old fl studio setup", you still do good stuff.
It's a fully-baked idea that needs some extra love... instead of a half-baked idea without a clue. Props for that.