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Hey, that is the first music I made with FL-Studios.
I would like you to tell me wether you like it, or what i could do better.

Enjoy listening!

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um. okay then.

right. sorry to say, but the piece is all over the place, and the drum does not add any extra quality to the piece. and since it has no established rhythm, it appears to be just an annoyance. but your Keyboard is nice. you propably play. at the beggining the synth melody is quite good, but it doesnt really suit the piece. i think you have the makings of a good musician. you just need practice and a basic knowledge of song structures. have a listen around, and try to acknowledge how and where different sounds come in, and whether they sound right to you. Thanks alot my friend. :D

Aschitaka responds:

Hi, thanks for your review and thanks for your suggestions!
You're right, the structure is one of by biggest problems. I'll look by other makers for their structure and I'll try to learn it by listening their music!

I know my english isn't realy good.. well, I hope I hadn't made too many mistakes ^^

Thanks again, You'll hear my new music as soon as possible!

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Jan 31, 2009
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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.