First Review :)
I thought it was sort of interesting, but you can really tell that you rushed on this one. Throughout the entire thing a lot of sounds just sounded like they didn't really belong that much. Also, throughout a little bit of the song there were a couple of errors that I noticed. The one that stuck out the most to me was somewhere right around the 1 minute mark of the song.
Overall - A lot of interesting and great sounds in this song, but for the most part I don't think they really fit well together or at least they didn't fit that well the way that you had them.
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