Other than some breakup on the mic, pretty good
I would work seriously on removing the noise from your mic (can hear your breaths on the mic, and some breakup)
However, you do have a fairly good voice, and as the co-DJ of Newgrounds Radio, i hope i can help you get some exposure.
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O.O I really don't know what to say.
Well, first off thank you for the compliment
Second off, I know (refering to the breath on the mic) I'm such an amature recorder -_-)
And uh...third....THANK YOU! I'm so happy.....for the constructive critisim and the podcast.