may be your first but...
this song rocks also has a relaxing yet fun sound to it and for all the evolution you have certently made this is one heck of a start when you think about it
its allright - but I feel it could use.. perhaps some better percussion :)
yours sounds kind of muted
but otherwise good melodies!
i like the strings and keys!
A very impressive tune, I think some of the notes and beats could have been a better defined - maybe more of a bass track. I enjoyed it though, keep up the good work.
Kind regards -
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.