Pretty good but...
...a little repetitive, well i guess that's ok my latest song is REALLY repetitive so this is ok. Oh and another thing, you should probably think about making endings because the fade at the made the song feel like it just stopped. Maybe if you were to extend the length of the fade out.
Overall
4/5
8/10
Come check out my songs too =] a little warning though: the first two suck =x