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Im sorry im not perfect

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yup right after I read your reviews I made this quick 30 second deal. My vocals sound like diarrhea is what you said . I record using a rockband microphone and a first act USB jack. I don't have a bunch of money for equipment or expensive programs. I work hard and my band puts on one killer show. Real instruments here. I can do this live. So to all you techno, metal heads. I'm sorry I'm not perfect.

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No hard feelings

I don't know what the deal with your last song was. In any case, you should learn from any criticism and make it better it each time. The reason we, well, the reason I comment is to give constructive feedback. That's the reason we submit our audio to the audio portal besides promotion is to make it better. Our ears are biased and you've got to open your mind to that. With that said, people can be heartless, and I know how much harder it is to produce decent audio recordings with real instruments on a low budget.

With this little comeback, I would like to hear a clearer guitar, especially the lower notes. In regards to your vocals, not bad. The opening "You" confused me because it set me up for dethklok or sometihng. On the last perfect, I propose two options, keep the note stable, or make a more definite vibrato or whatever type of embellishment you were going for


DJRevenge responds:

thank you for the critisism in an intellogent manner. The deal with my last song was that i had posted it for some intellogent feedback like you have given me thank. You of course are correct. and all i receieved on my last submission was a very immature review. I literally made that up on the spot. It took me 39 seconds to write, one sec to push play and and 38 to play it. It was an improve peace.

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Waiting for 4 more votes

Jan 27, 2009
7:52 PM EST
General Rock
File Info
749 KB
38 sec

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