okay, i like it

PRO'S:
-damn nice
just overall thats my feeling for it
-it has a nice flow
-I really like those low voices

CON'S
-its missing an undertone kind of melody
like, the choir runs all the way through, and it has a nice bassliine, but there isn't much of a melody to catch peoples attention
-I'm not feeling the high male stuff,
idk
if you have a low female?
that might sound a lil better
-needs more of a punch, maybe that would come with a melody, like a piano or organ
-longer, its real nice just make it longer
-and try to make it rap compatible, give it a definate structure
-louder snares and deeper/louder kicks

thats it
but i never waste my time on a bad beat
i do like it
alot
just needs a tad bit of work
5/5 10/10

and if you EVER need someeone to spit
hit me up