Review as I listen
First of all, I'm kinda not feeling the lead synth. It kinda feels too jumpy. I mean it can also feel lively to some ppl maybe but just not to me. =/
I feel like this song could use some BASS to pump up the happy.
Your percussion sounds are pretty weak.
This song is kinda like an uncontrollable fountain.
I think you put an excess of effects in this one.
The section from 1:51 to 2:06 is way too busy, and I can't tell whats going on.
Overall the pitch range of the song is little on the high side. Or maybe it's just the synth's problem.
Maybe simplifying the song and using different synths and better percussion would help.
This just kinda issn't my type of song also. =/ sorry
I hope the criticism helps
6/10 , 3/5