00:00
00:00
Newgrounds Background Image Theme

WonderSchwifty just joined the crew!

We need you on the team, too.

Support Newgrounds and get tons of perks for just $2.99!

Create a Free Account and then..

Become a Supporter!

::Ora's Chaos::

Share Download this song

Author Comments

My second song from Reason
To me this is a Dance type of song somewhat
but more on the Techno Side
I made this Song in one full week
enjoy
feel free to download and use it for ur flash
COMMENT PLZ i need FEEDBACK

Log in / sign up to vote & review!

Newgrounds accounts are free and registered users see fewer ads!

Review as I listen

First of all, I'm kinda not feeling the lead synth. It kinda feels too jumpy. I mean it can also feel lively to some ppl maybe but just not to me. =/
I feel like this song could use some BASS to pump up the happy.
Your percussion sounds are pretty weak.

This song is kinda like an uncontrollable fountain.
I think you put an excess of effects in this one.

The section from 1:51 to 2:06 is way too busy, and I can't tell whats going on.

Overall the pitch range of the song is little on the high side. Or maybe it's just the synth's problem.

Maybe simplifying the song and using different synths and better percussion would help.
This just kinda issn't my type of song also. =/ sorry
I hope the criticism helps

6/10 , 3/5

Not Bad

It has a nice rythm to it I bet if u take another week or so you can make it even better! For a song done in a week its pretty good and true it does has some chaos in it once and a while makes it nice and different to listen to.

Keep it up its a nice song.

mann this is awesome

man i love all your music i bookmarked them all keep up the GREAT work your music was the highlight of my night - Jake

pacmancorp responds:

thamks man

Hah, review

Hi Pacman,

Lots of people have been saying the same thing...."COMMENT PLEASE i NEED FEEDBACK" or somewhere along that lines. Reviews are very hard to come by nowadays on NG. Anyway, since I'm a bit lazy today I'm going to only point out the problems with this song. Everything else I don't mention means you did good. :)

22 seconds of the song I did not like that bell like lead. Maybe good in a 16 bit video game but not for dance music.
51 seconds in I hear some messed up thumping. I did not like it that much. Is that from your sub kicks?
I think you dragged on that bell lead part way too long. I wanted to hear a new instrument. Also a different composition. Too many high frequency instruments. Where is the bass?

So the song has some interesting concepts but it gets old fast. I don't feel comfortable leaving only a negative review so here are your pros in a nutshell.
Beginning of the song had some really strange instrument which brought an ethnic feel. Nice. Percussion was different from the usual dance songs so kudos. The organ instrument was great. Overall a 5/5 vote and 9/10 review. By the way, nice song title.

Bye for now

pacmancorp responds:

thank you very much for the review and all your feedback
I understand i feel lazy alot sometimes when its to writting a Review
YOU PPL WRITE MORE REVIEWS (not only for me for EVERYONE)
we love feedback EXEPT FOR THE FAMOUS PPL on NG
THEY ALREADY HAVE ALOT OF 'EM

nice

it has like a feel good tune to it...i can see it in some awesome game

if you get a chance take a look at my music

good job 5/5

pacmancorp responds:

Thanks i put a lotta heart into this one

Credits & Info

Author

Listens
980
Faves:
1
Downloads
86
Votes
5
Score
4.30 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 25, 2009
8:45 PM EST
Genre
Dance
File Info
Song
2.5 MB
2 min 47 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.