I like the song, but I find the "Jelly Donut" idea is kinda odd. Not a bad thing, but odd. It has a good beat and feel, but it's kinda repeatative towards the end.
Hell of a lot better than any Hardcore I could make, I can tell you that. lol. I try and try to make the synths sound right on FLStudios, but I can never get'm right. ^_^"