I love it.
maybe it's because I can relate or whatever, but it was good.
The vocals could use a little work though.
I tried to like it, I really tried but whatever I do I think this is very weird and unfinished. I won't hold back since you're signed an all.
Were you drunk when you make this? Because your voice sounds really out of key at points. A good example of an out of key part is the end at 2:27 when the vox start yelling.
When it got to the chorus everything sounded really jumbled up and crowded with sounds. I think the crashes you used are too loud, because it makes the song sound mental. Also I'm no Indie/Rock fan but I would have to say the guitar is too quiet and muffled by the 'crashes' and vocals.
I tried to figure out what the lyrics meant but I couldn't make out a story. Even after listening to it over 10 times. To me anyone who looks deep into this song they'll find a song that really needs remaking.
On the upside, [The actually is one] Besides not understanding the lyrics, the actual tone the chorus gets to makes me enjoy it.
Good work, keep it up. You just need to work on the equals.