I think it was pretty good, overall. But I think some of the instruments didn't really fit well with the others. I love how it starts to build up from 1:21 to 1:30, and would love if there was more impact when it gets fast. I don't really know the original song, so I can't say more than that.
Weeell, I made this when all I had was Midi Maestro. It*s rendered on that hamienet midi2mp3 converter! *shame*
I love it!
may i use it for an rpg maker game i'm doing?
Of course :P What kind of a game is it by the way? I'd like to see that! I really appreciate that someone uses this song!
Remix, it is.
It is sometimes too sharp or the instruments used are too fuzzy (stoic background noise). Too many different instruments too.
Surprisingly, the track holds the melody throughout the whole, which is just positive.
It is not untill 01:00 that the track really enters goodness. Into which, you did a great job. The rapidness at 01:31 is also well done.
I admit, the beginning is just sharp. I actually used a square wave for the main chords, and a church organ for the bg harmonics. Guess I shouldn't put the organ there...
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.