Not twinkle at all
The begining is like listening to a small boy getting notes on the piano wrong and the listener cringing everytime the note is off, but once it becomes twinkle twinkle little trance it is pretty good.
OK. I know it's short but I'm probably going to expand it.
However, I'm not sure if I should work more on this, or my other song that's a lot like it called "Mary Had a Little REMIX".
So, leave a comment to help me decide.
Not twinkle at all
The begining is like listening to a small boy getting notes on the piano wrong and the listener cringing everytime the note is off, but once it becomes twinkle twinkle little trance it is pretty good.
it's an eerie version of twinkle
COOL
It sounded AWESOME! but thats not how twinkle twinkle little star goes. Did you really want it to sound different from the original? If you really thought that is how it sounds, google twinkle twinkle little star, listen to it, and you'll see you're wrong.
otherwise it sounds pretty cool! Good job man! I don't think people should under-rate this song just because it doesn't sound like the original song, you added your extra touch(thats what she said) to it and it sounds gr8
thanks so much i agree!
and i guess it sounds a little off but thats mostly because its a much lower pitch.
not good
you need to chage the "melody". You should probally add on to mary had a little lamb first and see how that goes.
i wish i could but i don't know how to "chage" anything
lol no
it's not right, go listen to the real thing
hey man, do i go to your work and criticize you?
nah but seriously thanks for the review
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.