OK. The opening piano is a turn-off. Using preset FL Keys doesn't sound that great. You can get a better VST for the piano here:
http://www.madtracker.org/plugins.php ?category=instrument&subcategory=Pian o
Also, I would have liked to hear a better guitar synth. However, after listening to this, I think it works. The screaming is a little overbearing during the chorus, but it sounds great. Nice reverb effects with the screaming. Overall, pretty cool. Gonnna watch your account. Cool.