very good

if i ever make a flash game or movie good enough that it doesnt get blammed, i am so adding it!

Great!

Cool Yeah, Continue it, it sounds nice!!
Check me out if you want!
i have an ambience/techno out too:
Glowing dreams [Dj-S](full)
actually got on the charts!
Sooo happy lol.

Well....

Its more like ambient music in the beginning, but then it gets better, try spending a little more time experimenting with it and see what you can change, also, making it a little faster would probably help fit it into the trance genre.

Oh and try out a new sound with the beat or add another, and see what the outcome of that is.