Obviously im not going to repeat the whole criticism on the "Go" thing but well..ya. Overall it was repetitive but I really like the attack and drive the lead has I would keep that if u were to change the song. You should just add some variety and maybe equalize it. A good song, but in future works maybe you could consider these tips....your the artist do whatever you want.
I do like the lead you had going there. The percussion parts played to the riffs are nice too. The "go" sample (a native FL8 sample) should be scratched or something to avoid repetition. Yea, its a pretty cool chiptuney song.
In what way?
And i've had lots of negative on the 'Go' sample, i just wanted something cheeseythat made me smile and gave the song a more driving feel.
Thanks for the review and listening, when im good at mixing i might redo this one :)
I agree with the review below!
Here's a helpful tip: Try not to repeat parts of your song too often. If you have something really cool, build off of it! It's like a lego castle... you can't just keep building doors right next to eachother! Put some traps in there, some walls, maybe some chairs.
Maybe metaphor isn't the best device for advice.
Good stuff, but not enough to fill the 3:55 that you did.
But yeah, write another one and I bet it will be better. You've got a lot of good ideas in here. (except the guy saying 'go', that was silly and awful most of the time)
Haha thanks for the review
I felt the go fitted as the part it was in was rediculously cheesey. I agree with the build around the cool idea, i just need to perfect composing and get a full version of fruity loops so i can spend longer on it.
Another problem is i've not liked any form of dance music for long so i don't really have many definate inspirations yet. And this song should have really been two minutes or so tbh.
hopefully i'll have some great stuff one day, but for now my stuffs pretty run of the mill. Thanks for taking the time =)
It's still clear here that you don't have much experience with production- but this is an even better highlight of the basis for music that you clearly have.