I was reading transverse's review and im like ye ok he knows his stuff and i wud agree. The song was playing in the meantime and im like ye, this guyz got sum very nice ideas for a remix of an amazing song.
and then at the end, the last bit i was like HOLY CRAp thts good, so i wud stick pretty much to wat tranceverse said and keep ur ideas and i thnk the final will be absolutely mindblasting.
So, can't wait till its done :).
Nice, but there's room for improvement.
Ok, let me see:
I would cut down the reverb to like half of it at the beginning.
Slow down the tempo at 0:45.
Work on the fade/transition at 1:20. It's just too sudden.
Add a more saturated kick, instead of the dry one you have now.
Give it an overall less "Hardcore" sound.
Stretch it out. You don't have to switch styles every 30 seconds.
Way too short now.
Otherwise very promising. Needs some work though. Best of luck,
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.