Well, I saw your forum post...
and I was gonna not listen. But you seem like a n00b, and I just remember when I made those posts in the forum xD all I wanted was a decent review!
bye.. xD oj
Well, everything is well made. It kinda sounds like it should be in a save menu for a freeware game or something.
Try using envelopes (volume fades), and differ the velocities.
Try having some more reverb.
Nice experimentation, the synths were ok, but the violin sound (at the end) didn't agree with my ears.
Overall, this song has a nice progression and base idea, but sounds too bland, or raw. The only instruments with character,
You show potential
5/5 --> mainly because you deserve more exposure,
PS, you will think think almost every new song is your best, and wait in a few years time - compare this song to you newest in 2010 and hear how much you have improved ;D
PSS, I like to work on an R4R (Review For Review) basis, so please PM me (newgrounds.com/pm/send/zero123music)
on your thoughts on my newest, and best xP