You sure are good with chord progressions, melodies and harmonies.
I love the guitar melody, but you could have maybe made a delay or fade-out when the guitar melody ends 1:05 with the guitar. Small details but worth a try perhaps?
I really can't complain much about your compositions, because you are at a very good level with music already. I really have faith that you someday will make a bomb-hit that's gonna blow up the planet. Until then, just keep composing and improving by making more and more music.
By the way, is this inspired from Castevania in any way? The instruments and style reminds me from Lament Of Innocence and Curse Of Darkness.