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hey awsome!

This is a really good work of yours. I like the melody a lot! But you should EQ the drums a bit make it sound more in the foreground instead of the background.

But thats my opinion you dont have to if you like it this way.

I agree with all of the points of the guy below me

But I'll go even further than that. The drums don't really match the song. You need better drum samples. Furthemore, I would like to see more dynamics in your song, it feels like it was just compressed for loudness.

Otherwise, really good song. Keep it up!

Stolkmen5000 responds:

Really?

I thought the drums were ok for what I could find in my crappy library. If you know of any cheap yet great software for instruments or for just composing, I wouldn't mind getting it.

All I've got is crappy GarageBand and Logic, which are the only Mac things I can get. My Sibelius software is currently dead and I will try to revive that someday.

Anyway, TY for the review. I will take it into consideration when I attempt to compose a third version of this song. So far everyone likes the first.

Not bad.

Not bad. I didnt mind it. But something is lacking. I feel like the entire symphony and choir need to come together at the end to give the song a climatic feel. I think the drums also have to be a little more intense to really sell the song and the cymbol was a little too apparent.

After the organ piece you should have hit right back with an amazing strong symphony, with all the sections of the orchestra at full force. You had a nice theme though, and I liked the arrangement of it.

Good work though. Keep it up.

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4/5

Stolkmen5000 responds:

So your saying "Go on". I understand. And I think the theme is good but I didn't want to over extend t so I shortened the song. But I will take your ideas and thoughts into consideration when i compose Number 3

TY for the review

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Jan 20, 2009
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Classical
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1 min 55 sec

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