sorry

fl's geetur is not the way to go and the riffs dont really mesh with each other
maybe make the piano a bass n the geetur a teky lead

Levels

To much distortion for my taste (which took no part in my scoring).

The song follows a basic structure, which is good.
The transition into piano seemed odd.
Cutting the volume completely off the guitar sounds bad (to me).
The ending was very sudden.
The levels were off between the guitar and piano. While trying to listen to the nice piano melody, I'm being beaten down by a very punchy guitar.