Here In Me v2 - Sy(X)

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Please let me know what you think of my voice.

Here, In me, I have a lonely ride to go--
--Don't you say, nothing's gone until its done with
Where I'd seek, I'd fall, I'd find a way to
Break this earth, this barren rock, I would fly free
Away away away away, away from empty lights
and out in the world, I'd see, A darkness lifted in the breeze...

Oh, I haven't felt this free in a long while
-oh-ho yea-ah
It's like I've realized I'm not real
-no longer 'fraid to hide
I've left behind the iron curtains
-I've opened up my eyes
I see right through the walls I've built up
-I've broken down and cried
[End Chorus]

I've walked a lonely road
I've seen the ends of tie-ee-ime

I've lived a desperate chain
the ends of life are barren clear
and I can feel the rust
that forms upon the hallowed rods
where the stars do stop
to glance at feeble waves of green
and others look across
where streets are lines with gold
and I will break these bonds
which bind me to the earth
and I will see the day
the day the world falls down...


[Chorus w/ less instrumentation]
-I've broken down

[Chorus lines underneath Cried-----]
Here in me, I have a lonely road to go
Here in me, I'll find a way to break this earth

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not bad

not bad at all. nice rythem and all and the song wasn't half bad. Although it needed to have some more background song added into the mix it still came out nicely nice work

Sycross responds:

Thanks! Glad you like it.

good job

it is good and everything just wish you had something to clean the voices a bit

Sycross responds:

Yea, I agree that the vocals aren't mixed in very well. I just recorded over the instruments without adding any EQ or effects.

Thanks for the opinion,


Very nasally. I don't particularly like the vocals because you slide too much going from one note to another. It's odd.

Sycross responds:

Hmm, I never noticed that I slided from note to note... It's just something I do subconsciously. But I guess that's just my style. The nasality is probably due to the mic I'm using, which has a presence bump at 1kHz. I'll fix that up later with EQ. Thanks for the tips!


keep it up.

Sycross responds:


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3.92 / 5.00

Jan 18, 2009
9:08 PM EST
File Info
6.4 MB
5 min 37 sec

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