it is okay
the individual melodies are really good. however, i thought that it could use a lot of work on putting it all together. i thought that the synths came in abruptly. no transitions. i also thought that they were a little too loud compared with the rest of the track. i also heard some crackling in parts.
when everything meshes around 1:20ish, i think it needs some work on adjusting volume and mixing it together. it just seems random and very busy. in my opinion.
it has a good begining beat. its pretty good.
i liked this, it kinda just set me into a daydreamy mood
your drums are all good, this is pretty much a straight up classic trance song, it doesnt really change much, but it still has those minor things that keep it interesting
vocals were good, but i dont really think they were needed, idk mabye you were just testin a new mic or somthin
Constructive Critisizm: hmm..i cant really offer any, this song is just very well done, i give 9 because i try to reserve those for really EPIC songs
p.s. would you mind revieing some of my stuff, particularly my new stuff?
There were only vocals in the very end, but those weren't mine, that was Lisa Miskovsky's (reversed) voice. I would never record myself for a song, especially not just to test my mic! XD
But thank you very much for the nice review. Good thing you reserve your 10's, many people just tend to throw 'em around without leaving any sort of useful feedback.
By the way: Did you notice there were 4 layers of drums? :D
I personally love the build-up in the beginning.^^
PS: I will review some of your tracks asap.
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