it is okay
the individual melodies are really good. however, i thought that it could use a lot of work on putting it all together. i thought that the synths came in abruptly. no transitions. i also thought that they were a little too loud compared with the rest of the track. i also heard some crackling in parts.
when everything meshes around 1:20ish, i think it needs some work on adjusting volume and mixing it together. it just seems random and very busy. in my opinion.
it has a good begining beat. its pretty good.