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This is my second try on the track "I'll pay with my life". The last version was to distorted, I hope you'll like this more than the old. If there is still any criticism, then review, please!
Enjoy listening, voting and reviewing.^^

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nice.

Ok I guess I cant like ALL of your work. I wanted to though. This piece is very good indeed, but for some reason, the strings mixed in the way it is with the song grates on my nerves...I don't know why. Might be just me, my mood, or what I ate lol.

Still awesome work!

ps...ok I just realized what it was. the repetitive nature of the strings. Maybe mix that up a bit more? I dot know. I'm not a music person, I just know what sounds good.

T-Free responds:

It's always great to have a honest listener like you, that's what helps me to get better in producing. You are right with the strings, if I find the old song on my computer again, I'll work on them and upload a new version.
Mh, I noticed you leave reviews on my older songs, did you listen to some of my newer ones, too? I think I increased my skills a bit, would be awesome if you checked the new ones out and maybe left your impression. :]
Thank you very much, Mordoz!^^

This has the feel...

I was lookin for a hip-hop beat that had that feel for a movie. Took a break from flash for awhile but now i'm back, and i think i'd like to use this. If that's alright..
Anyway, i like your stuff.

-One critisicm, i think you wanted the kick to be hard, but it kinda distorts/crackles. Try and make it smoother. Stick it in EQUO or something see if you can keep that hardness but a little smoother on the release. Hope that helped lol.

5/5

-BM

T-Free responds:

I'll see what can be done. Thanks for being interested in using this.^^

Yea dis is tha shit

dis iz 1 of tha hardest beats i eva heard u gotta let me n ma group bump 2 dis is bumpin keep doin watchu do

T-Free responds:

I let you bump to this if you want.
Thanks for the review, I will keep doing what I do.^^

dude

great track...i could imagine some lyrics going to this... and given enough time i could that..with your premission i would like to try to put some lyrics to it....let me kno pm me or email me at death2frame@yahoo.com

T-Free responds:

Hey, great, you've my permission. :D
If something is finished, contact me per PN, please!
Thanks for your review.^^

Glad it was updated!

Toning down the base was a good idea. Glad to see you took your fans criticism to heart. While it isn't my favorite beat you have done its still great.

T-Free responds:

I only get better with the help of you all, so I have to consider the comments of yours. Thanks for your review.^^

Credits & Info

T-Free
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Downloads
327
Votes
7
Score
4.64 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 17, 2009
6:10 AM EST
File Info
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4.6 MB
4 min 1 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.