Try just one track
In my opinion it might sound beter
You do realize that the only reason the solo sounds as good as it does is because of multi-tracked harmonized lines, right?
Somethings i didn't liked
1.You didn't followed the notes well,sometimes you were out of time
2.Were you touching 2 guitars at the same time or there was another one? If none of these 2 was, then you can't touch the guitar well, unless you did it purposely or because you wanted.
3.There was only one instrument, and it felt like there was something missing, i don't know, why don't check yourself?
Anyways, if you try to correct these critics, i'm sure you'll make it to the top!
1. It was supposed to be out of time, and the guitar part is doubled.
2. There were two tracks, I overdubbed.
3. Not everyone has an orchestra at their beck and call, if you had perhaps checked out my page, it would explain that I am one person, with a few guitars, not much recording time and a very low quality set-up.
I apologize if I sounded pompous or asshole-y or anything like that. If you don't like this one, then maybe you should listen to some of my other songs, as they are all rather different from one another.