Turn up the vocals
Your voice is too quiet in this mix man. turn it up by about 15-20% I'd say. I do like the beat and the flow. Props for the shot at 50. Lyrics are fairly decent, not super amazing, but solid. Also, I think you need to mix the screwed voice in so that it blends with your voice. That would be a really cool effect if it mixed better. Good job overall though.
Thanks a lot.
I'll definitely try out your suggestions, I don't have a final cut yet.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.