i hear a lot of binary star influence in this, not just the beats but also the lyrics. big compliment coming from me cause i love those guys.
the chorus double tracking is a little bit messy, i think if you put the lower voice down in volume a bit more it would sound a good bit cleaner. there should be more double tracking throughout the song just to put a bit of emphasis on key words.
having said this i like this a lot, i'll check out your other song :)
Thanks a lot! XD Honestly, I have yet to peep Binary Star, but now I actually have motivation to.
And thanks for the feedback, this still isn't done so I can definitely implement your suggestions. Just a little preview for some feedback so I can make this the best I can.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.