I enjoyed this, very dissonant, and yet it seems to work :D
it has a memorable hook as well, which is alway a good thing :P
My Crit has to be the levels.
The piano is too loud, its clipping badly, particularly at the 1.55 - 2.20 point.
Not bad, not bad at all, just remove the clipping and its great :P
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