Okay

The beginning almost made me just give you a 3/5 and leave, but the song really improves when the first proper melody comes on.

One thing I'd say is that you needed to use a different kick sample(s). It's cool to have the same kick for one part of the song, but one thing I've noticed in a lot of hardstyle is that there are different kicks for different parts of the song.

Another thing is your gap between segments; they sound cool but you need to maybe add some automated delay to your lead, aswell as more reverb to the crash you use, so that it doesn't feel so sudden and forced.

I like the variation in melodies, and the different sounds going on in the background, it kept the song from getting too boring.

I'd give you an 8 or a 9, but that intro sequence was a little too off for my taste.
Overall, good job man. A very nice hardtrance tune.

7/10
4/5