As you said in your description, "Within all of them I attempted to add as many real world instruments with the exception of some synth material here and there." I believe that you did a very daring risk and it indeed payed off. The original song used more electronic sounds and that took away most of the feeling of the eeriness. Your remake, however, took the more tribal and playful sounds to pull you into the temple itself. When I listen, the beginning really does make it sound like the four Poe Sisters are revolving around me, snickering. After the intro, the percussion and winds kick in, this sets in not only more eeriness, but a sense a Kokiri curiosity.
I am really enjoying the song, it takes me through all the stages of the temple and has a lovely strength which compliments it. No sound is too quiet or too loud. I have to give this an honest perfect.