i actually loved the intro, its hard to make something repetitious that people can keep listening too, but i think your kick was kinda.... idk, muffled and distorted, try compressing it and the total mix was kinda low amplitude, try making the track a little louder.
the part that came in at 1:24 was cool, keep that definitely. i liked the pad that came in afterward as well.
the ending needs something, but hey this was a great loop!
keep up the work