enjoyable yet improvable
nice song overall...enjoyed the interesting texture of the piece...also, the edgeness that is characteristic of dance/trance/techno music...one thing that detracted from the piece was the constant transitions and the slight repetition of the melody...might want to make a break somewhere where the melody is complemented by a countermelody of some sort...overall, could do with a bit of work, but is still a nice piece that can be looped over and over...and over....and over...you get the point...
flow: 5.5/10 (might want to lower the number of transition points)
melody: 6/10 (try the counter melody)
percussion: 6.5 (i agree with Chubsy on the slight necessity for perc. complexity)
Overall: 6/10 & 3/5