A decent Hip-Hop song.
It's not bad. Probably better than what I could do. The melody seems a little soft for a hip-hop type song, but it does well with the sounds included. I think that "ripping" noise stays in the song for too long. Maybe if you had it split up into segments it would have been better. Good job at doing some Hip-Hop though. :)
P.S. It almost loops pretty well, too. :D
It's okay, I guess. It doesn't need to have voice to be hip-hop, most of these submissions on NG has no voice. The drums are good enough, the other sounds that need work. You're using FL Studio, right? I know some of the sounds there. The "flow" sounds weird, I think you should remove it. And the song was kinda repetitive, but it's okay. If you want to rap over it, then it's okay, the beats with voice on it are repetitive.
I though it was alright :)