it sets a great atmosphere
the only thing i might say is that while i like the slightly off timed notes, it would be nice if it settled into a more straightforward song at points, just to keep it esy on the ears.
It could work really well takin part of this as an intro and developing a second section as a solo piano part if you wanted.
The end is also so sudden, it needs somewhere to go, or just a fade out. Infact, a fade out could be a great way to progress this int oa more 'hard-hitting' section. It depends what you want to do with the song. As an ambient piece, its lovely, if you wanted to progress it even further however, bringing in new styles, i think this ccould work as an excellent introduction as well.
Basically its up to you, although i personally feel it feels unfinished and would sound good progressed, you may feel otherwise.
I can just see so many paths this could go down, it feels a shame to have such a sudden end to the piece.
Sorry if this review rambled a bit, but anyways, a quick overview.
Lovely song, with a lot of potential for any development or lengthening. Sets a GREAT mood, t seriously carried me away in it for a while when i first listened. To me theres just so much more it can become. Good work, and thanks for listening to some of my stuff :) Happy easter? aha
happy easter to you my new internet friend :P. I am considering doing a huge track with this as an intro or i may just touch it up. Ambient is one of my favorite genres and im glad you took time to give me some advice to better it. ill be sure to check out more of your work as you submit it.
Hey I can guide ...
been using fl studio for over 3 years now and know the ins and out of the program.
This song could go somewhere if you had control of your fx. and I think a note or 2 are off in the key signature that your writing your song in. the ending you need to tame the high soundz.
if you have aim hit me up sometime = kaielsz
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