This is nice! It's upbeat, just like the original, which is good. Also like the piano. My complaint is that some of the instruments didn't work with the song, and that sort of lost a little lust with that. Other than that, good job.
I'm assuming you're talking about the vocalist part. I agree, it sounds corny. I've moved to Reason, Digital Performer and Sibelius to write all of my new music, I'll try to post some of it back on here. Thanks for the review!
Funky sound choices
If you can't get a vocalist to do this, a better sound for the vocal melody line might have been a great improvement. The backup sounds great from what I can hear, but the main line takes away from that and makes it harder to enjoy.
Also, one thing people sometimes forget about the Beatles is that they have some sweet harmonies in the vocals, so that would have been good. If you could tone down the main line some that would be good too- it's a little loud and piercing.
Overall, sounds decent, but not great.
yeah, I was working with terrible software with a very limited instrument selection. but thanks for the review! I'll keep this in mind for the future.
Just as teh title says
more specific? like in what areas?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.